I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
HI Archer I really like how creative you were with the Slogan for the bill board but maybe next time you should delete the work that you didn't do in maths and the slide about what you have to do for writing.
You have done a great job this week Archer. I really like the mash-up house you made on minecraft for the reading task.
I really like the billboard you made to advertise your new transportation. You have used some colours that are known to be good for billboards and you have thought hard about how the background might impact how eye catching your billboard is.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
HI Archer I really like how creative you were with the Slogan for the bill board but maybe next time you should delete the work that you didn't do in maths and the slide about what you have to do for writing.
ReplyDeleteHello Archer I really like you slide and how you did a slogan and maybe delete the slide that you didn't do and nice transport
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job this week Archer. I really like the mash-up house you made on minecraft for the reading task.
ReplyDeleteI really like the billboard you made to advertise your new transportation. You have used some colours that are known to be good for billboards and you have thought hard about how the background might impact how eye catching your billboard is.