I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
Nice work Archer. Maybe next time you could change the font or bold the question so we can tell where your answer starts. I also noticed that some of your maths thinking is hard to read. Maybe next time you could put some of the questions on a separate slide, that way you will have more room to show your working out.
The game you created sounds pretty fun and I like how it involves team work. Something I think might be an issue with this game is finding 100 people to play. Maybe you could have instead changed this to "5 players or more".
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Good job Archer keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteNice work Archer. Maybe next time you could change the font or bold the question so we can tell where your answer starts.
ReplyDeleteI also noticed that some of your maths thinking is hard to read. Maybe next time you could put some of the questions on a separate slide, that way you will have more room to show your working out.
The game you created sounds pretty fun and I like how it involves team work. Something I think might be an issue with this game is finding 100 people to play. Maybe you could have instead changed this to "5 players or more".