we are learning about what if everyone is vegetarian and here is what I did
There will be so many animals farmers will be rich but one day something went wrong
SOMEONE DIDN'T like vegetables so his mum try 7 different vegetables meals one
was veggie burger with bean and lettuce with some tomatoes but he didn’t like it the
next was rice burritos it just a burritos with rice he didn’t like it then it was bean and
rice with eggs he didn’t like that next was a vegetarian burrito he didn’t like it and next
was vegetarian nachos I bet he will like it he didn’t like the last one was a vegetarian
lasagna with so hot chips but he didn’t it so he was eating pasta and sandwiches then
when he 20 he made a job that was call hunting he did hunting for the people you also
didn’t like vegetables he gave them meat
i enjoy doing the writing
are you are vegetarian
Kia ora Archer,
ReplyDeleteYou will need to upload your writing again as I cannot read it. Maybe you can put it onto a Google Slide?
Hi Archer, thank you for changing your writing so I can see it properly.
ReplyDeleteYou had some great ideas, I especially like how you included different type of vegetarian food the boy tried yet he still didn't like anything.
Remember to read over your writing before you publish because you have not used any full stops. We also want to try an include paragraphs in our writing (beginning, middle and end). Maybe paragraphs is something you can practice next week with your writing.