1 I disagree with opening are borders because it will make some people job a lot harder because they will need to have wear Masks and safety talk to them and gave stuff to them with gloves and the customers will need to have two or 4 bag of Hanson tiger for a week reason 2 a lot of countries are doing bad so if we open our borders then some countries might get worse because they might gotted covid-19 and some in NZ might get covid and are government will lock down where a person go if they have covid then even if no one saw him or was near and that why I think that we should not open are borders.
we are learning about if we should open are borders and I think no and this is why
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what do think about open are borders
R.T using fact and opinions
Hi Archer.
ReplyDeletePlease read over your writing again. You have only used one put stop in your whole writing. It also seems like you have no used evidence to support the points you have made, which is when you need to do some research. For example, how do you know other countries are doing bad with COVID? What countries are they?
You might need to look at the writing planning on the whaea Tamzin tab on the class site. This shows you how your writing needs to be set up.
You need:
An opening statement
2 - 3 paragraphs about the points you want to make
A conclusion
You also need to add your N.L and R.T for this piece of writing which is on the teacher slides. We had discussed this during our Google Meet and is also on our ako whanau writing planning.