I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
This is a very creative story. I like how you decided to use the water dragon to put out the volcano, I would have never thought of that idea. Water dragons are pretty special.
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Hi Archer. Water dragons are such amazing little creatures. Its great you enjoy animation. Happy learning!!!
ReplyDeleteoops that was from me :)
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ReplyDeleteThis is a very creative story. I like how you decided to use the water dragon to put out the volcano, I would have never thought of that idea. Water dragons are pretty special.
hi Anna I really like nominations good job
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