I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
This is a great rocket design - I really like the bold colours you have chosen to use. What is it about rockets that you like? I think it would be an amazing experience to go into space, it looks like such an interesting place in all of the photos I have seen.
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Hi Archer,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great rocket design - I really like the bold colours you have chosen to use. What is it about rockets that you like? I think it would be an amazing experience to go into space, it looks like such an interesting place in all of the photos I have seen.