I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
hi Archer I really liked the layout of your slide show but maybe next time you should change the color of your writing because white is really hard to read.
Kia ora Archer, you have used a pretty cool title page for your LCS. On slide 6 for your table of unknown words and definitions, maybe you could have deleted the extra rows and then you could have made the font larger for the words.
You did a great job completing this weeks wero, I can tell you thought hard about your new video game character and what it would look like. You've also done an awesome job using google drawing to create your new character.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi Archer I really liked the layout of your slide show but maybe next time you should change the color of your writing because white is really hard to read.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Archer, you have used a pretty cool title page for your LCS.
ReplyDeleteOn slide 6 for your table of unknown words and definitions, maybe you could have deleted the extra rows and then you could have made the font larger for the words.
You did a great job completing this weeks wero, I can tell you thought hard about your new video game character and what it would look like. You've also done an awesome job using google drawing to create your new character.