I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
Nice work Archer. I enjoyed reading the answers you had written for the reading task. For task 2, I like how you moved the pictures around that matches with the information for that year, however you needed to type in what happened to the artist. For example: 1962 - He painted the can of soup. I like the kiwi you made for the STEAM project, is it a sculpture? Maybe next time you can include a description about it. That way the reader will know what your art work represents.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work Archer. I enjoyed reading the answers you had written for the reading task. For task 2, I like how you moved the pictures around that matches with the information for that year, however you needed to type in what happened to the artist. For example: 1962 - He painted the can of soup.
ReplyDeleteI like the kiwi you made for the STEAM project, is it a sculpture? Maybe next time you can include a description about it. That way the reader will know what your art work represents.