I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
Nice work Archer. I really like how you showed the process of making a kite with photos. Next time I think you could have deleted some of the teacher slides and made them more unique to you. For example you could have deleted the slides about client 2 because you were focussing on client 1.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work Archer. I really like how you showed the process of making a kite with photos. Next time I think you could have deleted some of the teacher slides and made them more unique to you. For example you could have deleted the slides about client 2 because you were focussing on client 1.
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