I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
Nice work Archer. I can tell your group worked well together to finish making this presentation. Next time I think you could add more labels to your post. For example this post could have the labels: science, frogs and research.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work Archer. I can tell your group worked well together to finish making this presentation. Next time I think you could add more labels to your post. For example this post could have the labels: science, frogs and research.
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