I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
Kia ora Archer, this is Mrs Cameron. Thanks for sharing your learning about quality blog comments. I thought it was funny how many mummies you put in your comic strip. Next time you could give your post a title so that it catches people's attention.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Archer, this is Mrs Cameron. Thanks for sharing your learning about quality blog comments. I thought it was funny how many mummies you put in your comic strip. Next time you could give your post a title so that it catches people's attention.
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DeleteI really love your great comic strip. I don't see any mistakes on this.
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