I am a Year 5 student at papakura central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in kHH and my teacher whaea Tamzin and whaea Sharlee This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment..
Nice work this week Archer. I like the project you made for the Pahurehure inlet. However, I am not sure exactly what it is. It would have been great to have a written description about your project next the the Tinkercad screenshot. That way the reader knows what your project is. Next time, remember to delete the math questions you did not answer. We only want to see the work you completed during the week. I noticed you have not uploaded your writing to this slideshow. Will you upload this on a different post? I also think you could have added a few more labels to this post such as: LCS, Maths, Writing, Reading
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Nice work this week Archer. I like the project you made for the Pahurehure inlet. However, I am not sure exactly what it is. It would have been great to have a written description about your project next the the Tinkercad screenshot. That way the reader knows what your project is.
ReplyDeleteNext time, remember to delete the math questions you did not answer. We only want to see the work you completed during the week.
I noticed you have not uploaded your writing to this slideshow. Will you upload this on a different post?
I also think you could have added a few more labels to this post such as: LCS, Maths, Writing, Reading